Writing

W.A.L.T Walt: create a detailed and descriptive narrative.

we made this doc on the 03/12/2021/11:50

 

Emma Twigg article

This is my article about Emma Twigg because she it the best women rower in the world.

EMMA TWIGG DESTROYS THE COMPETITION

By Alex

Emma Twigg Won the gold medal at the Tokyo Olympics.

on Friday. A fish was so excited that she won it jump

out of the water! "For me this is for everybody.

It's a dream come true." 

Emma Twigg was looking so strong when she was in the lead and Hanna Prakatsen in behind but she had no chance of caching up. She made our country real proud. Twigg was so happy that she won.

Twigg is the best women rower in the world she reset the world record in rowing with a time of 7.13.97 which in a new world record. She is 34 born on the 1st of March she was the oldest out of everyone in the race.

In conclusion she is the best in the women's rowing. We cant wait for her to be back next year.

 

Alex's Haiku about autunm leaves

 W.A.L.T Write a haiku.

In room two we have been learning about Haiku's and the Autumn leaves.

We went on a walk the cross country. We also stopped at a point were there were a lot of leaves we made a hill of leaves and we jumped on it.

It was a lot of fun.

Limericks

 W.A.L.T Write Limericks.

Me and my friends made a really funny limerick.

We had to use a rhythm it went like this, Da DUM da da DUM da da DUM.

There was a man named Bob,

He had a real bad stinky job,

He had to pick up poop,

With one big scoop, Then exploded his real bad job!

Leave a comment if you like it and give me feedback thank you!!

W.A.L.T  write information report.

We have been 

working on working

 on a information report 

for the past week. 

😀😀 here is a link to the doc 😀 😀

Camp thank you letter

This is devils punchbowl in the winter

W.A.L.T

Show our appreciation

in a written letter.

Dear Darren,

Thank you for helping out on camp you made it so much more fun.

Without you it would of been so boring!

Thank you and I would not have made it up

to devils punchbowl without you!

Thanks again for making it so much 

fun!

Yours Sincerely, Alex H

 

bringing the world to NBC 🌏

On the 17/11/2020 my school NBC, had a international night each class had practised a dace or song to preform in front the entire school. i was super nervous and exited because my class   was up first we did chunnari chunnari then ninth we did the lonely goutheard the food was amazing. 

Thanks for reading 👅

TURQUOISE CRAYON LETTER

W.A.L.T Write a persuasive letter.

Alex,

Listen up buddy, turquoise crayon here. You’ve used me so much that you could lose me in the carpet. It's amazing that you’ve used me for clear skies and oceans but now I CAN’T SEE OUT OF THE CRAYON BOX! So I QUIT. 

Your stubby friend,

Turquoise crayon

The Little Shoemaker

W.A.L.T Analyse and create a character description

This is a story about a Little Shoemaker that lives in a small town, in an even smaller shoe shop surrounded by humongous buildings. In the story it looks like his only friends are some shoes that are alive, some girls and some boys.

 He has a massive moustache and spiky hair. He wears a blue shirt and over the top of it is a light brown apron. 

He wears square glasses on his brown eyes. He stands strong and when pushed down he gets back up. He moves tough like he is moving through a storm. He's a really and I mean really great man he’s funny, kind, thoughtful and courageous.

And that’s the story of The Little Shoemaker. If you bump into him say hi and don’t get onto his bad side…

That's my story of the little shoemaker!

The Story of Sina and the Eel.

This is the story of Sina and the Eel its a real cool video because that people made the puppets out of cardboard but its not in the video if you cant read the words on the pitcher this is what they say,Listen to the people talking also trust people like your nabaor also check out my other Samoan blog post on my blog.

The Great Escape!!

We are learning to do narrative writing. I enjoyed creating the story and coming up with freaky ideas.
What was hard for me is thinking up how to start my story and how to end my story.
My next step is to make my storeys shorter and more descriptive.

can you come up with a story?


The Great Escape!! It  was a stormy night on Saturday my grandpa just passed away then we heard on TV someone had dug the body out and the person who had put the body in the hole is gone.

Let's get to the start so my name is Alex and my friends are Fletcher and Jayden we had superpowers my superpower is to turn into Pokemon,Fletcher's power is to turn indivisible and mimic himself also other things, Jayden`s power is to shape shift.We were going to a summer theme park on Saturday, we heard some sad news my grandpa passed away it started to get stormy so we headed home when we got home me Fletcher and Jayden watched the sun get covered in pich dark clouds we ran inside lightning flashed we turned the TV onto Nickelodeon we loved it but it got intercepted by the superhero news it said¨ Alex's grandpa has escaped from the grave and all the other dead people there also stormy with a chance of apocalypse, we heard a deathly scream so we head outside to see what the comosin was it was someone getting their brains eaten zombies started to come out of the graveyard.Me Jayden and Fletcher started to light the zombies on fire with our matches and kicking the zombies butts until there was one zombie left so I said to the zombie ¨ do you want to go to your grave¨ the zombie nodded as the zombie hobbled away to the grave butt man came parashoting down from the butt mobile and sent that zombie to its mamma and I light its shirt on fire after that i said ¨I love fire¨ after that fireworks light up the sky also the clouds on fire.

Life Cycles.
We are learning to right explanation now i'll show you a tuatara explanation.
you need stuff in it like a title, intro, stages, subtitles, factual info, technical language. We watched video. it was real hard it all to add all the detail.   I did well with the formatting my righting. 
Did you now this stuff?

The Tuatara Life Cycle

This is a life cycle of a Tuatara! It goes through four stages which are Egg, Hatch-ling, Juvenile and Adult.

Stage 1 The Eggs:

The female tuatara lays 10 - 19 eggs in a deep burrow in the soil. The eggs stay underground for 12 to 15 months that's more than a year! If the egg is warm its a female and it's cold,it's a male.Then they hatch into a hatch-ling.

Stage 2 The Hatching:

As soon as it hatches its on its own. There left to defend there self. It has three eyes one on top one on the side and one on the  other side. Hatch-lings are 12 to 15 cm long. The first 15 years of the tuatara life is called a Juvenile

                                                

Stage 3 The Juvenile:

Juveniles do not mate or lay eggs.  Juveniles and adult tuataras by only coming out at day time. 

Stage 4 The Adult:

Adult tuataras eat little tuataras. The male is much bigger than the female tuataras. Adult tuataras are about 45 - 60 cm long. They eat beetles, crickets, spiders, frogs, lizards, eggs and birds. Tuataras have survived almost 200 million years.

              

recounts

We are learning about recounts this is my recount. My goal is to add detail. I think I did pretty good. This is my recount down be low ↡

BEST DAY EVER!!!!!!

I saw a bunch of cute dog toys.I saw a black Labrador x springier spaniel.I heard a cute little bark.I heard the squeak of the dog toy.I felt a little tongue on my leg.I felt so happy I cried.I wonder if it was my old dog's spirit?

could you do a recount?😃😃😃

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