Friday, 25 October 2019

recounts

We are learning about recounts this is my recount. My goal is to add detail. I think I did pretty good. This is my recount down be low ↡

BEST DAY EVER!!!!!!

I saw a bunch of cute dog toys.I saw a black Labrador x springier spaniel.I heard a cute little bark.I heard the squeak of the dog toy.I felt a little tongue on my leg.I felt so happy I cried.I wonder if it was my old dog's spirit?







could you do a recount?😃😃😃

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  1. Anonymous25 November 2019 at 10:36

    Hi Alex,Zeb here I loved your puppy blog post it was so cute I think you need to work on your spacing between your punctuation and capitals. At the end I wonder if that was your dogs spirit?

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  2. Anonymous25 November 2019 at 10:46

    Hello Alex its Jayden here from New Brighton Catholic school. I really like this recount because you did a really good job at using descriptive words. I think you could work on putting punctuation in the right spots.Whats your dogs name?

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  3. Anonymous25 November 2019 at 10:50

    Hi Zeb I don´t now thanks.

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  4. Anonymous27 August 2020 at 14:49

    Hi Alex, that dog looks like a puppy. It is pretty cute. Great job, maybe you could write what you thought the dog was doing next time. I have a dog called Bindi and she is 5 years old.

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